原材料传达了两层意思：第一层的含义是热爱工作、热爱生活，享受工作中的乐趣励志感恩作文袁隆平；第二层的含义是人必须拥有美好的梦想，努力的实现自己的梦想。
我觉得你应该是沾到第一层的含义（热爱工作），但“偏题的程度”就看你怎么表达了。
总而言之，让老师定位偏题不是一件容易的事，也不是一件困难的事。
考完了，放轻松点，先好好享受一下紧张后的生活。

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